Overall I think that this was a very well done elevator pitch. The pacing of your words was powerful, and the spacing added anticipation especially at the hook. I also think that you did a good job with including hand gestures as a way to keep the audience engaged. There are two major things that I would work on: firstly try to make it so the camera catches more of your posture rather than just the chest up and also try to not pace forward and backwards. Other than that, with a little bit of practice, this is a great attempt at an elevator pitch.
Overall I think that this was a very well done elevator pitch. The pacing of your words was powerful, and the spacing added anticipation especially at the hook. I also think that you did a good job with including hand gestures as a way to keep the audience engaged. There are two major things that I would work on: firstly try to make it so the camera catches more of your posture rather than just the chest up and also try to not pace forward and backwards. Other than that, with a little bit of practice, this is a great attempt at an elevator pitch.
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